"Coggle" response to Bazerman

Coggle is a nifty little brainstorming/flow-chart making program provided by Google.  In order to use it you need an account with Google.  It's all online and fairly easy to use.
So, I was assigned to use this tool in order to make sense of a particularly dense reading, and here it is! (thats the link to the Coggle diagram - hopefully it works).

Workout Video (you will be in pain)

So the first time I did this, for about two to three days afterwards my legs were in serious pain.  Good pain.  I'm not complaining.  But if you want something that will light your thighs on fire, I have found it for you.
My goal is to eventually be able to do this video without it hurting.

Composition Theory class, Friday 10/10/14

Vygotsky

 Zone of Proximal Development

(in between independent performance and assisted performance) student can kind of do it on their own.
Ex: pointing at every object in order to count them, eventually the student will outgrow the need for the tool, the pointing (AKA scaffold).
More emphasis on nurture instead of nature

Social context

influences not only what we think, but how we think it.
learning happens not after the brain has sufficiently developed [Piaget], but while development is happening

ergo....
what scaffolds do we, this class, need to understand composition theory better?

Mass Extinction Caused by Humans

Read about it here

I can't talk too much about this or else I'm going to cry/have a panic attack/go into a spiral of guilt and sadness.  The last time Earth had a mass extinction was 450-440 Million Years ago.

In the next 85 years, half of all plants and animals will be extinct.
In the next 334 yeas, three-quarters of all mammals will be extinct.

Composition Theory Related Idea: My Theory

In talking with a classmate in my Ficiton II class about why I am continually drawn back to a certain story, I said this:

"He [a character of mine] is a distorted representation..interpretation of my own personal problems, and as long as I continue to have these problems he will continue to fascinate me"

And then I realized what just came out of my mouth and I was like, "Eureka!"  That's Greek, it means "I've found it!".  I thought that this would be a very cool thing to talk about.  It's my own theory (I actually said "that's my theory")about how I write, not anybody else, not how I learned to write, but why I write.  What I get out of it.
I thought that was worth writing down and sharing.  Thanks, Jamina.

Four Short Writing Exercise for the Different Philosophies

group: Kayleigh, Lauren, Joey, Cindy

Mimetic

Ex: Research a current event of your choice and write an opinionated essay about it.

Rhetorical

Ex: Take an oppositional stance.  Write an anti-fracking essay for a conservative audience.

Expressionist

 A free-write about: something personal, an experience that many people have in different ways. Reflections
Ex: Reflect on your first day of school (any school)

Formalist 

Ex: take a paragraph of your own work and closely examine the use of prepositional phrases.  Are they needed?

Response to Fulkerson's Four Philosophies of Composition

• For the Fulkerson article, select 1 quote from the reading and describe the context of the quote, Fulkerson’s main point, your interpretation of that quote, and its significance to your knowledge of how writing classrooms have been structured.

  • Select one concept or definition in the chapter and define it in your own words. What is easy about defining this word and what challenges are raised?

quote I explore:

"Expressionists cover a wide range, from totally accepting and non-directive teacher, some of who insis that one neither can nor should evaluate writing, to much more directive, experiential teachers who design classroom activities to maximize student self-discovery" p.344

interpretation:
expressionists teach writing in a less formulaic way, geared towards the individual.
significance:
These guys sound like the most fun.  I think that expressionists are the best people to teach creative writing (that's why I'm attracted to it).  It's a lot harder to discover yourself if you're stuck looking at sentence structure and diction.  That's the kind of stuff that makes most people think that they hare writing.

concept I define:
a general description of the four philosophies:

formalist: judgement based on form - grammar, spelling, syntax - work on the sentence level, and focus on generalized "norms"

expressionist: writing is a self-discovery, the process is indiviual like the writers

mimetic: clear and logical thinking, analysis of the larger conversation

rhetorical: audience-centered, emphasis on persuading the audience